Monday, December 21, 2009

Friends Poem

I know you have a friend

who buys you lunch

tickles you to life

shapes your dreams

a friend whose palms

open up like sunflowers

to the scorching sun

that Friend

who smiles despite

an arrow on her side

Floats and waits

to buoy the drowning

Like me submerged in

simple selfishness

The work structure or organized was Thankful of having a Good friend that cares on you, the poem begun seriously, it go next to be more Happy because his friend is caring about him. He was considerate of caring other person. The plot of the poem when his friend help him in everyday activity. It relates on its emotion of the poem.

The reader responds i like the poem because it talk about good friendship that all of us can relate.

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